Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #54: Free & Think – Delusion 26/07/201528/07/2016Claudette You believe you’re free whilst spoken words imprison a truth of your soul © ceenoa Like this:Like Loading...
the secret keeper 26/07/2015 / 3:01 pm Very subtle. If I run the words in the second & third line I see the meaning overflowing with an awareness only the soul perceives. Profound. jk LikeLiked by 2 people
Claudette 26/07/2015 / 6:05 pm Thanks Jk, glad you found something in it meaningful. I guess that is what we all hope for when we write something. LikeLiked by 1 person
the secret keeper 27/07/2015 / 4:17 am I think so. We want to find meaning. Haiku brings such concentrated awareness. It gets into your soul & the Muse gets to play. Wordplay & Haiku are a joy in puzzle making. What will come out from the dark & reveal to us some light? jk LikeLiked by 1 person
Vashti Quiroz-Vega 30/07/2015 / 5:54 am Hello Claudette! Your haiku asks the question, ‘are we really free when we can’t even speak the truth for fear of being condemned?’ Love it! 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person
Claudette 30/07/2015 / 4:25 pm Hi Vashti, sometimes we are just a touch deluded about our freedom. Truth should be freedom, but sometimes it is just more chains. LikeLiked by 1 person
Very subtle. If I run the words in the second & third line I see the meaning overflowing with an awareness only the soul perceives. Profound. jk
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Thanks Jk, glad you found something in it meaningful. I guess that is what we all hope for when we write something.
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I think so. We want to find meaning. Haiku brings such concentrated awareness. It gets into your soul & the Muse gets to play. Wordplay & Haiku are a joy in puzzle making. What will come out from the dark & reveal to us some light? jk
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What indeed. 🙂
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Hello Claudette! Your haiku asks the question, ‘are we really free when we can’t even speak the truth for fear of being condemned?’ Love it! 😉
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Hi Vashti, sometimes we are just a touch deluded about our freedom. Truth should be freedom, but sometimes it is just more chains.
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Sadly, I agree.
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