Not a Haiku: Loud & Silence

The loudness of empty may overwhelm the silence of fulfillment.

(Not a Haiku for the Challenge, just a thought I left too late)

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kazg10 13/07/2015 / 9:30 pm

Brilliant! 🙂

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- Claudette 14/07/2015 / 8:19 am
  
  Thanks Karen, for your lovely words of support.
  
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skybright1 14/07/2015 / 8:33 pm

Very true!

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ChristineR 20/07/2015 / 1:09 pm

That’s beautifully worded.

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- Claudette 20/07/2015 / 5:25 pm
  
  Thanks Christine, sometimes words work for me, other times not so much. How’s your re-draft coming?
  
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  - ChristineR 21/07/2015 / 12:54 pm
    
    I’ve gone back to scratch. Just finished transferring my scene notes to proper index cards. I’m doing triage – scene by scene – to see what needs to be done. Thanks for asking.
    
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    - Claudette 21/07/2015 / 4:44 pm
      
      Wow, that sounds like a big job. Hope it goes well for you. I just don’t have the commitment to writing lots and lots of words and having them make sense – hence poetry for me 🙂
      
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