Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #54: Free & Think – Delusion

You believe you’re free
whilst spoken words imprison
a truth of your soul

© ceenoa

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8 thoughts on “Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #54: Free & Think – Delusion

  1. the secret keeper 26/07/2015 / 3:01 pm

    Very subtle. If I run the words in the second & third line I see the meaning overflowing with an awareness only the soul perceives. Profound. jk

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    • Claudette 26/07/2015 / 6:05 pm

      Thanks Jk, glad you found something in it meaningful. I guess that is what we all hope for when we write something.

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      • the secret keeper 27/07/2015 / 4:17 am

        I think so. We want to find meaning. Haiku brings such concentrated awareness. It gets into your soul & the Muse gets to play. Wordplay & Haiku are a joy in puzzle making. What will come out from the dark & reveal to us some light? jk

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  2. Vashti Quiroz-Vega 30/07/2015 / 5:54 am

    Hello Claudette! Your haiku asks the question, ‘are we really free when we can’t even speak the truth for fear of being condemned?’ Love it! 😉

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