Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #54: Free & Think – Delusion

You believe you’re free
whilst spoken words imprison
a truth of your soul

© ceenoa

8 responses to “Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #54: Free & Think – Delusion”

  1. Very subtle. If I run the words in the second & third line I see the meaning overflowing with an awareness only the soul perceives. Profound. jk

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    1. Thanks Jk, glad you found something in it meaningful. I guess that is what we all hope for when we write something.

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      1. I think so. We want to find meaning. Haiku brings such concentrated awareness. It gets into your soul & the Muse gets to play. Wordplay & Haiku are a joy in puzzle making. What will come out from the dark & reveal to us some light? jk

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  2. […] of to search and to find happiness in every day: Delusion. Definite true […]

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  3. Hello Claudette! Your haiku asks the question, ‘are we really free when we can’t even speak the truth for fear of being condemned?’ Love it! 😉

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    1. Hi Vashti, sometimes we are just a touch deluded about our freedom. Truth should be freedom, but sometimes it is just more chains.

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