Resin Nature Art
***My brain just won’t let this one go, it nagged at me today, (don’t be so wordy, make it cleaner, simpler, distil it down) so I had to rewrite it again. I promise, this is the last time, a variation of three is more than enough.
Somewhere,
out there,
you may be.
Walking around,
the unknown part,
of me.
© ceenoa
P.S. even as I typed it, the words changed again – this one is slippery!
Oh, thank you. Glad it worked for you too.
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I am so pleased you think so. I did follow a haiku challenge for a while, and I really did enjoy it a lot. I also used to do another challenge where you had to use “42” words, I even won a “newcomer” award for one of my mine. I enjoyed both of those, because you had to be sparse with the letters. 🙂
Ah, thanks so much for you very kind words. I think this one is done now (I hope). 🙂
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It doesn’t matter how many times a verse that eats away at your mind and heart is composed, changed and rearranged. What matters is the feeling you put into it and the feeling it engenders in others. keep writing, rewriting, until you are happy and at peace with what is before you.
Thanks Mum. I kind of like the last one, it can be taken a couple of different ways (at least to my mind) which does capture what I feel. Sometimes I would like to find another part – mostly not though.
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Slippery to you maybe but I thought it was simply wonderful.
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Ceenoa 
Happiness is kind words from a friend …..