Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge #16

Released from my haunt
I wander aimlessly lost
Beyond ties that bind

© ceenoa

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7 thoughts on “Weekly Haiku Prompt Challenge #16

  1. Hugh's Views and News 29/10/2014 / 9:13 pm

    Nice haiku, Claudette. In spirt (excise the pun!) with it being almost Halloween. I think it tells a great ghost story.

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    • Claudette 30/10/2014 / 4:41 pm

      Nope, no Halloween for me, I’m an Aussie, we don’t do it 🙂
      Yes, it could be taken as a ghost story, but it came from a different part of y life.

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  2. Elizabeth 01/11/2014 / 11:58 pm

    Hi Claudete, I like it, some people really need the haunt, ghosts to keep going!

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    • Claudette 02/11/2014 / 12:45 pm

      Yep, gives you a focus, something to hold onto. Getting lost is not just about being lost (if you get my meaning).

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  3. Ronovan 03/11/2014 / 12:38 pm

    I kind of see this as a haunt in the way of a place, is in that place is my old haunt I used to hang out in. At least that is what I am putting in my rewind. Loved the usage. Even if I am wrong.

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    • Claudette 03/11/2014 / 4:20 pm

      Thanks, Ronovan. I guess that is the beauty of words, they can mean many things. I really like what other people read, because it makes their connection to my words.
      For me this related to the death of my husband, and how hanging on to that loss, and then letting it go, made me feel.

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