I walked into the valley

A poem from long, long ago …

I walked into the valley
I reached up to the skies
I bubbled over laughing
despairingly I cried

you saw where I was broken
you touched and made me whole
for nothing more than everything
I offered up my soul

© ceenoa

5 responses to “I walked into the valley”

  1. Love the juxtaposition and paradoxes here.

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    1. Thanking you. Just the way it happened.


  2. beautiful feelings..:)


    1. Thanks RJ. Sometimes when I read my old poems I wonder what I was actually meaning – this one is exactly what I still feel.


      1. well that happens with everyone..and that’s a funny feeling though… 🙂

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