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I walked into the valley

A poem from long, long ago …

I walked into the valley
I reached up to the skies
I bubbled over laughing
despairingly I cried

you saw where I was broken
you touched and made me whole
for nothing more than everything
I offered up my soul

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Claudette

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5 responses to “I walked into the valley”

  1. Little Miss Menopause Avatar
    Little Miss Menopause

    Love the juxtaposition and paradoxes here.

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      Thanking you. Just the way it happened.

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  2. RJ Avatar
    RJ

    beautiful feelings..:)

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      Thanks RJ. Sometimes when I read my old poems I wonder what I was actually meaning – this one is exactly what I still feel.

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        RJ

        well that happens with everyone..and that’s a funny feeling though… 🙂

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