Eyes shut
fingers fumble
numbers forgotten
I cannot dial the phone
I search
desperately
longing to hear
a voice gone silent
waking after dreams
the melody lingers
I face reality
a single life
my cage
I can only sing the tune remembered
Ceenoa
Resin Nature Art
The Tune Remembered
34 responses to “The Tune Remembered”
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“longing to hear a voice gone silent…” Your words strike a chord. I like this a lot.
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Hope it wasn’t a discordant chord. A plaintive chord is how it feels to me.
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sad.
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How sad. 😦 Well written though!! But sad…
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Thanks Jen, for your kind words.
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Lonely. I’ve been there.
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Thanks for your comment Natalie.
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Such sadness envelopes this poem.
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This dream always stirs me up for days afterwards. I can’t really express what it does to me.
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“waking after dreams/the melody lingers” You capture the longing so perfectly.
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I try, I still can’t get it right, there is too much of it sometimes. Thanks for your nice comment.
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“I can only sing the tune remembered.” The prison within. Great take!
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We always create the strongest bars ourselves.
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Oh, yeah, I know that tune. Great response to the prompt, too!
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Thank you. It is a “popular” tune!
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This makes me glad that the lonely years are so far behind me.
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🙂 lucky you.
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I OFTEN dream of not being able to operate a phone. It’s so frustrating! (I know that’s not really what this is about.)
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In a way it is. I do have this dream, and I believe it is a symbol of the fact that I can’t “find” him, but it is always a phone the evokes the worst feelings
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Your sadness is tangible here, Claudette. After reading this, I miss him too. ❤
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Thanks Nate. I know I’m biased, but he was great. 🙂
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So much pain 😦
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Other moments are filed with happiness. If there is no pain how can you know you are happy?
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The pain, the sorrow is conveyed beautifully.
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Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly.
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Beautiful last line.
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I quite liked it when it came out, very truthful to me too. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
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Memories can chain us and free us. This is truth.
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A chain that we create link by link
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You got me!! That is beautiful. Gut wrenchingly heartbreaking. I am crying. Amazing eyes!! You could drown in those!! Huge hug my gorgeous girl!! xxxxx
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Aah, he did indeed, and I did, and I still do. Blue, like mine they were. No crying, now. he past is another country, for most of the time anyways. Drink and be merry I say (sipping my Schnapps helps).
Hugs right back to you.LikeLike
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Ceenoa 
Happiness is kind words from a friend …..