Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #36 Field & Beacon – Wildlife

20/03/201529/03/2015Claudette

You were the beacon
and I the forgotten field
now fruitful with life

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Prakash Hegade 20/03/2015 / 7:36 pm

Excellent! 3 awesome lines of staying strong and happy!

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- Claudette 21/03/2015 / 8:52 pm
  
  Thanks, I appreciate your happy comment.
  
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega 21/03/2015 / 6:13 am

Hi Claudette! I got a picture of a pregnant woman who was abandoned by the love of her life. 😦 I’m probably way off. Loved it.

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- Claudette 21/03/2015 / 9:44 am
  
  Hi Vashti – the fertility bit was right – but I didn’t mean to imply abandonment. However, poetry can be read many different ways. Thanks for commenting.
  
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- Wild Daffodil 23/03/2015 / 5:54 am
  
  I can see how you got there – I too thought of pregnancy but not abandoned – love the enigma of it
  
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  - Claudette 23/03/2015 / 7:24 am
    
    🙂 must be something in that then – everyone seems to be getting the same picture. When I wrote this it was with my husband in mind (when I first met him) so it was all happy for me.
    
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Ronovan 23/03/2015 / 5:43 am

I agree with Vashti on the definition of the fertility part. I saw a perhaps a pregnancy later than expected or a surprise after a time a trying.

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- Claudette 23/03/2015 / 7:20 am
  
  mmm – interesting. Wasn’t my intention, but maybe it was subliminal as it was about my husband.
  
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pattyalcala 23/03/2015 / 8:23 am

That was a good way to use our words for this week.

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- Claudette 23/03/2015 / 7:30 pm
  
  Thanks Patty. 🙂
  
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