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Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #36 Field & Beacon – Wildlife

You were the beacon
and I the forgotten field
now fruitful with life

Claudette

20/03/2015

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10 responses to “Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #36 Field & Beacon – Wildlife”

Prakash Hegade

March 20, 2015 at 7:36 pm

Excellent! 3 awesome lines of staying strong and happy!

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1. Claudette
  
  March 21, 2015 at 8:52 pm
  
  Thanks, I appreciate your happy comment.
  
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega

March 21, 2015 at 6:13 am

Hi Claudette! I got a picture of a pregnant woman who was abandoned by the love of her life. 😦 I’m probably way off. Loved it.

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1. Claudette
  
  March 21, 2015 at 9:44 am
  
  Hi Vashti – the fertility bit was right – but I didn’t mean to imply abandonment. However, poetry can be read many different ways. Thanks for commenting.
  
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2. Wild Daffodil
  
  March 23, 2015 at 5:54 am
  
  I can see how you got there – I too thought of pregnancy but not abandoned – love the enigma of it
  
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  1. Claudette
    
    March 23, 2015 at 7:24 am
    
    🙂 must be something in that then – everyone seems to be getting the same picture. When I wrote this it was with my husband in mind (when I first met him) so it was all happy for me.
    
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Ronovan

March 23, 2015 at 5:43 am

I agree with Vashti on the definition of the fertility part. I saw a perhaps a pregnancy later than expected or a surprise after a time a trying.

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1. Claudette
  
  March 23, 2015 at 7:20 am
  
  mmm – interesting. Wasn’t my intention, but maybe it was subliminal as it was about my husband.
  
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pattyalcala

March 23, 2015 at 8:23 am

That was a good way to use our words for this week.

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1. Claudette
  
  March 23, 2015 at 7:30 pm
  
  Thanks Patty. 🙂
  
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