Bath – A Short Paragraph Story

During the night, as she tried to free herself from the bath, she thought about how the tingles she felt at their first kiss should have been a warning. At the time she had been entranced by the sparkles in his eyes and his delicate touch, which had fooled her into thinking that she wasn’t just another bird to him. Now, with the bathwater freezing around her weighted legs showing her the true coldness of his heart, she bitterly regretted inviting Jack to visit again.

6 responses to “Bath – A Short Paragraph Story”

  1. Neatly done, Claudette 🙂

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  2. Your tale is happier than mine, as I only saw a bird going down the drain. At least with yours, love (or lust) was involved. 😉

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    1. Thanks, sadly it was one-sided lust as Mr Frost cares for naught.

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