Bath – A Short Paragraph Story

26/06/2019Claudette

During the night, as she tried to free herself from the bath, she thought about how the tingles she felt at their first kiss should have been a warning. At the time she had been entranced by the sparkles in his eyes and his delicate touch, which had fooled her into thinking that she wasn’t just another bird to him. Now, with the bathwater freezing around her weighted legs showing her the true coldness of his heart, she bitterly regretted inviting Jack to visit again.
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Tish Farrell 26/06/2019 / 5:51 pm

Neatly done, Claudette 🙂

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- Claudette 26/06/2019 / 8:17 pm
  
  Thanks Tish.
  
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CJ Hartwell 30/06/2019 / 6:11 am

Your tale is happier than mine, as I only saw a bird going down the drain. At least with yours, love (or lust) was involved. 😉

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- Claudette 30/06/2019 / 8:10 pm
  
  Thanks, sadly it was one-sided lust as Mr Frost cares for naught.
  
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Brian Lageose 30/06/2019 / 3:15 pm

Love. This.

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- Claudette 30/06/2019 / 8:11 pm
  
  Ah, thanks Brian.
  
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