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Jangle

like a jar of marbles
rattled energetically,
this jangle of words in my head
skittle back and forth,
and never settle
to a rhythm that makes sense.

Claudette

26/02/2018

Random Moments, Rhyme, Verse & Poetry, Words with Intent

Poetry, thoughts, Verse, Whimsy

13 responses to “Jangle”

skybright1

February 26, 2018 at 7:32 pm

Must have been a bad day because most of your rhythms make sense. Or did someone win your favourite “taw”?

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1. Claudette
  
  February 27, 2018 at 8:12 pm
  
  This is not making sense to me – what is my favourite “taw”
  
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2. skybright1
  
  February 27, 2018 at 9:56 pm
  
  What? You mention marbles and don’t know what a TAW is! Google could have told you that it is “a choice or fancy marble used as a shooter.” It was always VERY bad to lose your favourite taw in a game.
  
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  1. Claudette
    
    February 28, 2018 at 8:41 pm
    
    Ah, I see. Thanks for the clarity 🙂
    
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Brian Lageose

February 27, 2018 at 4:22 am

Ah, I know the feeling well…

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CJ Hartwell

February 27, 2018 at 8:46 am

How often the words in my head sound brilliant, until I finally find a pen and then fwoosh! The words are gone. You got my sentiments perfectly!

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1. Claudette
  
  February 27, 2018 at 8:13 pm
  
  Yep, it’s very frustrating sometimes. Fwooshing should be outlawed.
  
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Quirky Girl

February 28, 2018 at 11:23 am

Hmm. This sounds disturbingly similar to the chaotic turbulence in my brain. My marbles have definitely been rattled a time or two… 😐😁

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1. Claudette
  
  February 28, 2018 at 8:42 pm
  
  Yeah, and the suckers take ages to stop!
  
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wdfyfe

March 1, 2018 at 6:59 am

Been there. Done that. Lots!

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1. Claudette
  
  March 1, 2018 at 7:26 pm
  
  Unfortunate side-effect of thinking 🙂
  
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lindywhitton

March 2, 2018 at 11:41 pm

Just imagine my marbles fell out into a glittering, pithy comment. Enjoy!

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1. Claudette
  
  March 3, 2018 at 9:21 am
  
  I am, oh how I am – it was a good one 🙂
  
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