Jangle

like a jar of marbles
rattled energetically,
this jangle of words in my head
skittle back and forth,
and never settle
to a rhythm that makes sense.

© ceenoa

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13 thoughts on “Jangle

  1. skybright1 26/02/2018 / 7:32 pm

    Must have been a bad day because most of your rhythms make sense. Or did someone win your favourite “taw”?

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    • Claudette 27/02/2018 / 8:12 pm

      This is not making sense to me – what is my favourite “taw”

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    • skybright1 27/02/2018 / 9:56 pm

      What? You mention marbles and don’t know what a TAW is! Google could have told you that it is “a choice or fancy marble used as a shooter.” It was always VERY bad to lose your favourite taw in a game.

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  2. CJ Hartwell 27/02/2018 / 8:46 am

    How often the words in my head sound brilliant, until I finally find a pen and then fwoosh! The words are gone. You got my sentiments perfectly!

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    • Claudette 27/02/2018 / 8:13 pm

      Yep, it’s very frustrating sometimes. Fwooshing should be outlawed.

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  3. Quirky Girl 28/02/2018 / 11:23 am

    Hmm. This sounds disturbingly similar to the chaotic turbulence in my brain. My marbles have definitely been rattled a time or two… 😐😁

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  4. lindywhitton 02/03/2018 / 11:41 pm

    Just imagine my marbles fell out into a glittering, pithy comment. Enjoy!

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    • Claudette 03/03/2018 / 9:21 am

      I am, oh how I am – it was a good one 🙂

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