Ceenoa

happiness in the small moments

Jangle

like a jar of marbles
rattled energetically,
this jangle of words in my head
skittle back and forth,
and never settle
to a rhythm that makes sense.

© ceenoa

Claudette

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13 responses to “Jangle”

  1. skybright1 Avatar
    skybright1

    Must have been a bad day because most of your rhythms make sense. Or did someone win your favourite “taw”?

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      This is not making sense to me – what is my favourite “taw”

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    2. skybright1 Avatar
      skybright1

      What? You mention marbles and don’t know what a TAW is! Google could have told you that it is “a choice or fancy marble used as a shooter.” It was always VERY bad to lose your favourite taw in a game.

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      1. Claudette Avatar
        Claudette

        Ah, I see. Thanks for the clarity 🙂

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  2. Brian Lageose Avatar
    Brian Lageose

    Ah, I know the feeling well…

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  3. CJ Hartwell Avatar
    CJ Hartwell

    How often the words in my head sound brilliant, until I finally find a pen and then fwoosh! The words are gone. You got my sentiments perfectly!

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      Yep, it’s very frustrating sometimes. Fwooshing should be outlawed.

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  4. Quirky Girl Avatar
    Quirky Girl

    Hmm. This sounds disturbingly similar to the chaotic turbulence in my brain. My marbles have definitely been rattled a time or two… 😐😁

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      Yeah, and the suckers take ages to stop!

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  5. wdfyfe Avatar
    wdfyfe

    Been there. Done that. Lots!

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      Unfortunate side-effect of thinking 🙂

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  6. lindywhitton Avatar
    lindywhitton

    Just imagine my marbles fell out into a glittering, pithy comment. Enjoy!

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    1. Claudette Avatar
      Claudette

      I am, oh how I am – it was a good one 🙂

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